vox nihili

I must admit, I didn't read the entire thing due to lack of time...*looks again at clock on computer, realizes must now go to bed* But what I did read, ...

Schowy about not getting the next part posted yet, but I have tons of stories going, plus school and such. i will get it posted in the next week, I ...

Youps! Schowy! I didn't mean to post twice... ;) :oops:

Erm..disturbing. I'm not a big fan of suicide poems, although I've only read a few. This one is definitely heart-wrenching, and that's a good sort of poetic quality I envy ...

so I wrote this for school. It's going in our permanent portfolios, so I want it to be uh, really good. Right? So please give me a few pointers. My ...

I wrote this while watching the documentary Planet Earth. It's a really good show....Anywho, 'Rainbow.' ........ The flourish of color That graces the dull grey branches Is only a shadow ...

I tend to find an idea for a climax or plot, and then build an idea of the people I want to be involved in it. Then ASAP, I start ...

Chapter one: Nightmare in the Clouds The bitter wind was edged in ice, stinging like the talons of a raptor; the slate stratus clouds an omen of the torrents that ...

My nano ended somewhere around (a liberal estimate) 9k. Seriously, well, I didn't try to end it-- the story line itself has a long time to then end, but I ...

I don't expect you to understand these things before I tell you about them. But if I ever met you, I would want you to. Because they affect me in ...

Please, please comment! :D A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later ...

So I didn't read the whole thing, but, what I did read--h-i-l-a-r-i-o-u-s! One crit/comment: go back over it and try capitalizing the first and last name of Harry Potter. And ...

So I didn't read the whole thing, but, what I did read--h-i-l-a-r-i-o-u-s! One crit/comment: go back over it and try capitalizing the first and last name of Harry Potter. And ...

Ookay. I may seem harsh, but please don't take it personally--it's just a crit... Number one: 'I look down, eagle's eye' that doesn't make sense. Are you looking at the ...

Good poem! I love the imagery. But there are some issues to be addressed that would make it better: *I don't mean to sound harsh, but please consider these things* ...